You’ve seen (or heard) it a hundred times:
“It’s not just a product — it’s a revolution.”
“It’s not just an event — it’s a movement.”
“It’s not just data — it’s insight.”
This go-to move in AI-generated marketing, copywriting, and brand storytelling is, frankly, a brand serial killer. If you’ve ever found yourself copying and pasting a line like this, you can stop now.
This “contrastive” construction — a rhetorical flourish that starts by minimizing one thing and elevating another — is somehow seen by our favorite LLMs as punchy, dramatic, and emotionally satisfying.
It may have turned a head or two once upon a time.
But when something becomes so overused and predictable, as it has, its persuasive ability is about as dull as a plastic knife on a coconut shell.
So how do you keep some emotional impact in your verbiage without leaning too heavily on AI’s favorite writing crutch? Let’s explore five stronger alternatives, with real examples and adaptable templates you can use to upgrade your writing on the spot… and write like the glorious human you really are.
1. Elevated Reframe
Use when: You want to show growth or transformation over time.
Instead of:
“ADMS isn’t just an event — it’s a movement.”
Try:
“ADMS began as an event. It has grown into a movement.”
Template:
X started as [basic concept]. It has become [impactful concept].
2. Declarative Emphasis
Use when: You want to sound confident and direct.
Instead of:
“This isn’t just software — it’s a lifeline for small businesses.”
Try:
“This software is a lifeline for small businesses.”
Template:
X is [surprising or bold quality].
3. Purpose-Centered Shift
Use when: You want to highlight deeper meaning or values.
Instead of:
“This isn’t just about efficiency — it’s about equity.”
Try:
“At its core, this is about equity. Efficiency is just the path we take to get there.”
Template:
At its core, this is about [value]. [Other trait] is the method, not the mission.
4. Juxtaposed Sentence Pairing
Use when: You want drama and clarity in two simple lines.
Instead of:
“It’s not just data — it’s insight.”
Try:
“You can collect all the data you want. But until it becomes insight, it’s just noise.”
Template:
You can have [X]. But without [Y], it doesn’t matter.
5. Metaphorical Framing
Use when: You want to make a visionary or poetic impression.
Instead of:
“This isn’t just a product — it’s a revolution in design.”
Try:
“This product is a quiet revolution in design, reshaping what people expect from the ordinary.”
Template:
X is a [vivid metaphor], transforming [context/expectation].
Why Does It Matter?
Great writing avoids the overuse of rhetorical gimmicks and favors clarity, rhythm, and emotional truth. If your goal is to inspire trust, change minds, or move people, your words — and your sentence construction — need to feel fresh, not formulaic.
So next time you’re tempted to copy and paste, “It’s not just X — it’s Y,” the message you may be telling the world is that your brand voice is missing from the equation — and you’ve given up all agency to the machines.
And if you’re not in the headspace or mood to use any of the alternatives presented above, it would be strongly advised to just #hireahumanwriter.